Friday, July 26, 2019

Friday Feedback with Sarah Aronson: Top 5 things about writing picture books—even if you think you are a novel writer.

Hey, all, Happy Friday! I am so ridiculously happy and honored to have Sarah here. She's an extraordinary writer, teacher and human, and I'm so thrilled she agreed to be here to give feedback to you today!

I was especially excited for the release of Sarah's awesome new picture book, JUST LIKE RUBE GOLDBERG, because, from a young age, my parents taught me about him, and his name became like Kleenex-for-tissue in our house, a two-word description for anything that was deliciously eccentric, complicated, or complex. Here's a brief description for the book!

Discover how Rube Goldberg followed his dreams to become an award-winning cartoonist, inventor, and even an adjective in the dictionary in this inspiring and funny biographical picture book.

See? An adjective!! Yes!! Just like he was in our house!!!

So, please check out this -- and her other books, order a copy for your classroom or kids, and ask your local library to order it in if they haven't already. A worthy title for any and all collections!! And now, without further ado, here's Sarah, who, I think, expands on the concept of finding the joy and play in our work as we go along we started talking about last week, and then shares FIVE awesome tips for picture book writing:

Hey there! My name is Sarah, and I like to write in multiple genres. 



I didn’t think it was going to be this way. 

A couple of years ago, after two YA novels and a MG novel, I took the dramatic (at least to me) step to try and write the genres I didn’t think I was good at. I have talked about this decision a lot over the years. Mostly because it changed my career. And made me a happier writer. But at the time, I didn’t know what was going to happen. All I knew is that my third book sold poorly. My fourth book didn’t sell.

I was having less fun. 

I needed to get out of my own way. To learn to play. To be like David Bowie. To embrace the creative life all over again. To think less, write more. 

And did I say have more fun?
I really wanted to have more fun.

During the next six months, (and ever since) I totally indulged myself. And it worked. I wrote The Wish List Book One: The Worst Fairy Godmother Ever. 




I started an adult novel (that I still have to finish). I wrote a bunch of picture books—some awful. Some didactic. Some pretty good. One of them came like a spark of inspiration. It became Just Like Rube Goldberg—which was published by Beach Lane Books with GORGEOUS illustrations by Robert Neubecker. 

The process of making that book taught me a lot. More than five things. But today, let’s talk about the top five things about writing picture books—even if you think you are a novel writer.

#1 
Let’s start with the thing everyone talks about when they talk about picture books: 

WORD COUNT!
Here is what I learned right off the bat: Short word count is not a demotion. It is a challenge to get to the heart of the story. To embrace THE FORM. 

A short word count helps create better pacing. 
(Don’t you hate it when you are ready to turn the page for a new illustration, but there are still more words to read???) Remember: picture books (like all books) are cinematic. But unlike novels, they are driven by and inhabited through the pictures. Although the words come first in the submission process, the words cannot interfere with the illustrations. 

When I saw Robert’s illustrations taking shape, I deleted words.

Now when I work on my picture books, whether fiction or true stories, I try to make them as short as possible. Because words you don’t need are…well…words you don’t need.

#2
YOU HAVE TO FEEL CONNECTED TO YOUR SUBJECT. 
Or in other words: you have to love what you are writing.
Or in other words: your heart must be in your story.

Just like Rube Goldberg is all about Rube. But it is also all about ME. It’s about my ideas about creativity—that are embraced by Rube’s. Every second of the process was FUN. Even when I was frustrated with my own limitations, I was enjoying playing with the words. 

If you are not having fun…
If writing is not feeling like ice cream…
If you are making decisions because of THE MARKET. Or BECAUSE SOMEONE TOLD YOU SOME RULE. Stop.

Start a new page.
Find your heart in the process.
(You will thank me later.)

#3
Writing a true story? BACK MATTER MATTERS. Back matter isn’t just a chance to show off how much research I did. Back matter marks the spot where curiosity met process. (Not for nothing, editors like to see that you did your work.) TRUE STORY: when I was researching Rube, I actually found ANOTHER STORY. But mostly, thinking about back matter made me think more about my reader. There was a lot more I could have shared. I created back matter and a bibliography knowing that my readers would be curious, too. I want them to keep learning after they are done reading, since the book couldn’t be about everything. 
Note: I will be on a panel talking about this at NCTE. Come say hi!

#4 
TAKE THE TIME TO MAKE THE DUMMY.
See your story on the page.
Draw bad drawings.
Read your book and turn the page. 
My first Rube Dummy showed me where I needed to show more.
The dummy I just made for my new secret project which I cannot announce yet (Shhhhhhhhhhhhh), showed me where I was overindulging and writing too many words that I did not need. When I cut those words, THE BOOK SOLD.


LAST and MOST IMPORTANT: 

#5
TRUST and CONFIDENCE are ESSENTIAL.

Just like any project, you have to trust yourself. 
You have to trust your reader friends.
You have to trust your agent.
You have to trust your editor. 
You have to trust your illustrator. 
It’s a lot of trust.
And I will admit: I am bossy. I had ideas for Rube. BUT NONE were as good as this:




So that’s it.
Five things.
In less than 1000 words.


And, now, I guess it's my turn to put my words where my mouth is and offer up a brief excerpt for your feedback, inviting you to do the same in the comments!

If you've never participated in Friday Feedback, please first read THE RULES!!!

Here is a piece of a picture book WIP I am working on. I'm actually about to submit it. 



It's called As Easy as 1 2 3.

Who is the most exhibited artist in the world? 
Would you believe Picasso?
Or maybe Monet?
Or how about Dan Robbins?

Never heard of him? Pull up a chair.

Dan Robbins worked at Detroit’s Palmer Paint Company in early 1950. His Boss, Max Klein, could see the writing on the wall. For the first time, Americans had the time, inclination, and money to take up new hobbies—including art. 

He asked Dan to create a coloring book—to drum up sales of children’s paints.

But Dan had a better idea. 

He knew that the great master, Leonardo da Vinci, taught his apprentices to create fine art by giving them numbered patterns. 

Each number on the canvas corresponded to a unique pigment.

Like 1 for red.
And 2 for yellow.

Dan figured if it worked for Leonardo, it could work for America, too.

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So that's it! Looking forward to your comments and your excerpts!!!

Sarah (& Gae)




77 comments:

  1. oooooh....what a great subject for a picture book. I see a blended genre book coming. A read and color book? I like the connection to DaVinci.

    I have a question and an excerpt to share that is a specific form. It's a form I shared on my blog today called haibun. Haibun is a combination of a short prose piece and a travel haiku or tanka. I'm wondering if that might have appeal for a PB agent/editor.

    I'm pasting my excerpt below. The entire Haibun can be found on my Poetry Friday post for today: https://awordedgewiselindamitchell.blogspot.com/

    Road Home

    It was done. Blaisha was several days into her journey, recalling events that led to her victory. Gran’s death had been the start, she thought. If Gran were still alive she wouldn’t have left caring for her to travel so far to the king’s court for the contest. At Gran’s burial, Alwin told her of the court's prize offered to the story teller that could best ease the king’s downcast mood and raging headaches.

    Blaisha had cared for Gran with herbs and stories these last three years. She believed she could sooth the king given a chance but the walk to court was days. After the funeral, a unbearable silence pushed her to pack a bag and tie her sandals.

    By the time Blaisha was announced, His Majesty...

    a road less traveled
    threads through field to hill to sky
    reckons each mile
    kindly shade tree and cloud
    that walks a traveler home

    Thanks for feedback! I took a class with Sarah several years ago and learned a LOT! Thanks for your enthusiasm and encouragement in all places I find you!

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  2. Hi Linda! Thank you so much for joining in! I am so intrigued by this form--for all genres. Certainly, a story told in a combination of prose and poetry can work.

    So let's look at your opening!
    Blaisha seems like a great character. She has a goal--to soothe the king. And a skill--to tell stories.

    She seems to be an otherwise every day girl.
    She has . lost her Gran.
    She wants to help his Majesty.

    The glimmer for me: "Unbearable silence." She is a girl of words. Of music? Of sound?

    My questions: the backstory seems potent. Is there a potential story there?
    Your first action--and first impression--and first verb is "recalling." I challenge you to introduce her in a more active way.

    My challenge: What is your story about? In ten words? Or less?
    What are the biggest obstacles she faces?
    How will she change?

    Before we focus on FORM, let's think about the high and low points of the story--and how this form lends itself to telling this story best.

    It is lovely writing. Is a picture book enough to contain it? Do you need a longer form to stretch this particular story out?

    Thank you for sharing!
    Sarah


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    1. Ooooh, Linda, very intrigued by all of this (that ^^^)!!! Not much to add to Sarah's awesome feedback. Her comment about "recalling" struck me most. Reminded me of this Chuck Wendig post about starting with the banana. Does this apply to PB's? If so, thinking how active the line is, "It started with Gran's death." BANANA! ? http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2012/11/14/why-stories-should-never-begin-at-the-beginning/

      I also love this tidbit of feedback: "The glimmer for me: "Unbearable silence." She is a girl of words. Of music? Of sound? "

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    2. How did you feel when you wrote that word? When you imagined that unbearable silence? That is a glimmer you should mine!!!!

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    3. Thanks to you both. Great article about skipping the peel...getting right to the banana.

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  4. Sarah, thank you for sharing. Your new WIP sounds incredible. My students will love it. Love all the different advice too.

    My piece of sharing comes from a YA novel. I’m working on two this summer. This is from my contemporary one. The MC has just found a body in the river.

    I sunk my feet down into the river bottom and held on to the body until help arrived.

    “You okay?” Dell asked.
    “Yep. You aren’t looking are you?”
    “No. Keep talking to me Jury so I know the river ain’t got you.”
    “The river’s not getting me, Dell. I told you we have an understanding.”
    “You can’t trust the river, Gram says so. You need to talk, Jury or I’m looking.”
    I don’t need another round of Dell’s nightmares. So I talked about how I’m glad summer vacation has started.
    “And you and Truman can go fishing every day.”
    I looked down at Truman’s bloated bossy and wondered how you go fishing with a dead man.


    Thanks so much for your thoughts. Best wishes on your writing.

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  5. Hi Martha! Thank you! And thank you for joining us.

    Oooooh, I am intrigued.
    These short sentences add a lot of tension. (I always recommend looking at your novel as a physical being. Are there moments of long prose? White space? Dialogue? This kind of passage heightens our awareness because it sounds, reads and looks different.

    So without knowing much--Dell is your MC?
    What does he want? Why? What are his misbeliefs?
    This setting is really singing!
    How does finding this dead body change everything? How does it change the trajectory of the novel?
    Think ACTION REACTION! What does he do next???? Who is Jury? What does he/she want? Misbeliefs? Why is he/she in this scene? What is their backstory???

    Why is this story important for you to tell? Want to discuss???

    Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Martha, so good. Agree about those short sentences that pack so much punhc about your characters. Also, the names: Jury and Dell?! Those feel perfect to me. Sarah asks great "character" questions that always, always lead to story. Keep going! <3

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  6. Hi Martha! Thank you! And thank you for joining us.

    Oooooh, I am intrigued.
    These short sentences add a lot of tension. (I always recommend looking at your novel as a physical being. Are there moments of long prose? White space? Dialogue? This kind of passage heightens our awareness because it sounds, reads and looks different.

    So without knowing much--Dell is your MC?
    What does he want? Why? What are his misbeliefs?
    This setting is really singing!
    How does finding this dead body change everything? How does it change the trajectory of the novel?
    Think ACTION REACTION! What does he do next???? Who is Jury? What does he/she want? Misbeliefs? Why is he/she in this scene? What is their backstory???

    Why is this story important for you to tell? Want to discuss???

    Thanks for sharing!

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  7. Gae and Sarah-

    Thanks so much for Friday Feedback. I love your idea, and I can envision the pictures.I really appreciate the advice you have listed, too. I have been working on a Tongan folktale. My husband and I adopted two children from Tonga. There are very few children's book from Tonga. I have done the research, hired an editor, and I have done a dummy book with pictures. I do think that I need to take out some words, but I also feel that folktales are a bit longer. I would love your feedback on the opening pages. (There will be a glossary)

    Among the scattered islands of Polynesia, there are many legends and myths. One such myth comes from the island of Tonga.

    Grandfather (Kui) stood in his workshop. A canoe (popao) was being carved out from the trunk of a kamani tree. A tiki carving was on a small table, and shelves were stacked with coconut bowls and other carvings. Dust rose and fell as grandfather sanded the tip of a long pole. The young boy stood close, waiting for the old man to notice him. Grandfather looked up, a small smile on his face.
    “Nakai,” he said, “Let me show you something. Come closer. See what I have done.” Nakai reached up to touch the tip of the wooden javelin.
    “It is very sharp,” said Nakai.
    “Yes, it is. This is called a ‘sika’, and I am going to tell you the story of ‘Ahe’eitu and his father, Tangaloa, which my grandfather told me, and someday, Nakai, if your memory is as sharp as your eyes, you will tell this story to your grandchildren.”
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    Far above the earth--where the sky is as blue as the feathers of a kingfisher bird, and even above the fluffiest clouds, where even the tallest trees do not reach--lived Tangaloa, the Great God of the Sky.
    Tangaloa amused himself by observing the earth below. Sometimes, he would lie on a cloud and push his hands through the soft white mist to peer down to the earth. He enjoyed looking at the sweeping deserts, the jagged mountains, or gazing at the cold arctic glaciers. Staring below, he wished to visit the earth as a man. He was most curious about the people who walked about the earth and how these human beings lived.
    The sea delighted Tangaloa the most. When the dolphins played together, or the whales sprayed water like fountains, he longed to join in too. And why couldn’t he? Where should he go first? There are so many beautiful places on the earth.
    More than once he had gazed at a blue lagoon where a girl gathered seaweed (limu) to dry, and sometimes he saw this girl pulling in a net with fish. “Ah, how beautiful she is!” he thought. She had big brown eyes and long, wavy hair, dark as the darkest part of the ocean floor, which caused Tangaloa’s heart to leap. A wreath of sweet-smelling hibiscus and heilala crowned her head. Her name was Va’epopua.
    One day he made a decision. He would visit earth by following his heart to the blue lagoon in hopes of a glimpse of Va’epopua. Just as expected, Va’epopua came to the lagoon. She noticed Tangaloa standing behind a palm tree. Not hard to miss, Tangaloa was like a giant, six and a half feet tall, and built like an ox.
    Curious and friendly, she greeted him, “Malo e lelei (hello), would you like to gather seaweed, and help catch some shellfish for dinner with me?” Tangaloa agreed eagerly to help Va’epopua. He hoped she would see his desire to spend time with her.
    Each morning, Tangaloa would come down from the sky to meet Va’epopua at the lagoon where he quickly learned the ways of the land. He enjoyed her pleasant voice and musical laugh. He was falling deeply in love with Va’epopua.

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  8. Hi Kay! Thanks for your comment and for submitting! I love folk tales. Just as I was walking this morning, we were talking about all the BIG issues that folktales introduce. They are universal and specific at once!

    Your opening evokes the universal and specific. The language pulls me into the world of the story. But the glimmer is THE GIANT. I also like your voice here.

    But word count isn't a rule for nothing. The big question is: are you leaving room for the illustrator?

    Marci Colleen just posted an article she wrote about this very subject. When I was writing Rube, there were lots of lines I had to give up--because they were dictating images for the illustrator--and I wanted the final product to offer layers of meaning.

    So, are there lines you can give up? YES. There almost always are.
    Do you need a frame to tell this story?
    When I know I need to cut--but I don't know what to cut--I set a goal to decrease my word count by 1/3. That may seem like a lot of words, but be bold! Do it. When you are done, see what you've got. Then start to put back the words that make the narrative unique!

    Good luck! We need stories like this!

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    1. Thank you so much for your feedback. I know authors frequently comment they had to cut out some of their most favorite passages. I do not need the frame story; we used Nakai as this is our grandson who was just born this year from our son who is adopted. But for sure, I do need to cut out. Thanks again! I love your book!

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    2. Thank you! One of my darlings was this: Rube was left handed, but people wanted him to write with his right. (But he always drew with his left.) Now I tell kids about that in my school visits!

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    3. I'm not the PB expert here at all, UNDERSTATEMENT, so just giving you one gut comment (besides I love this and love that you are writing a book for your Tongan children. Here's my thought/question. In this sentence here:

      The young boy stood close. . . why not name him -- Nakai -- right there? It takes us right to him/right into the story. HIS story. Of listening to his Grandfather's story. Wonder if there's a reason you choose up front to call him the boy. And Sarah, feel free to disagree with me!!!

      Good work, Kayb. Keep going!

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    4. So, I love when, in workshop, we start exploring different options. Every story offers many options. (I have an alternate beginning for mine, too.)

      My question always is: what does it add to the story?
      Does it distract?
      The opening of a picture book should answer a lot of W's:
      who is the story about?
      where does it take place?
      When is it happening?
      What is happening?
      All that comes before you worry about gorgeous writing!

      I also like to think about the ending: is my beginning establishing a vector that leads to the end???

      Once you've thought about these things, you can decide exactly where your PB starts. You have the skills. You have the story! This is a discussion about tone and choices!

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  9. Hi Sarah - I have always loved RG. I remember getting books with his cartoons out of the library as a kid. Last year, I worked with my 5/6 grade teaching team and our kids all designed their own RG machines. They had a ball!

    I have also always loved books that taught me about the origins of everyday items. I did not know the DaVinci connection to paint by number. Fascinating! My adult son has autism, and he loves to color by number (and I love to do it with him). It calms him, and I think he likes the order of having the color choices already made. I hope your book will have a section or even a companion volume for coloring. I look forward to its publication.

    I have nothing to contribute today, but I thank you and Gae for giving your time to help the writing community.

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    1. This previous comment is mine. I don't know why I'm being listed as "Unknown." I'm signed in.

      -David Cassidy

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    2. Hi, David,

      Thanks for chiming in. Your presence here at FF over the years has meant so much to me! Glad you identified yourself.

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  10. Thank you!
    I am LOVING learning about Paint By Numbers. (I need to find my old Mona Lisa with red hair!) What a great thing to do with your son! Just like in writing, structure is freedom! Paint by Numbers inspired a lot of people to paint. My fingers are crossed for this story!

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  11. Oh how I love this. I am always so envious of ideas that are novel like this. I think there are no original plots left and then this. So good. My kids and students love learning facts like this and about little known people, as if being famous but not really famous is intriguing. I can't wait to see it and hope that it is interactive with pull out pages to color. I have discovered colored pencils and coloring again. So relaxing.

    My WIP is from my memoir Yield that I shared a section of before
    “I can’t veed!” I tried to speak clearly. The words were there but took so long to say and when I heard them I wanted to cover my mouth, so shocked by the sound of my own voice but my arms did not answer my demands.
    “We know you have asthma. We will give you a breathing treatment as soon as we get to the hospital…”
    “No. Wain. The wain!” Gargle. Gargle. What the hell is that? Why can't he stop the rain from drowning me?
    “Just swallow it for now honey. You’ll be OK. It won’t hurt you. I’ll suction you. We have some work to do here first. We’ll be pulling out in just a minute. Now here’s a big stick in your hand, sorry.”
    The familiar stick of the IV in my hand and the wads and wads of tape that would be impossible to remove later made me cry out. Again the crying sent waves of rain rushing down my throat. IVs were familiar to me because my asthma had gotten worse in the last year and I was rushed by ambulance many times with an IV and a shot of epinephrine.
    “You ever had an IV before?”
    “Yeah.” Something was wet and lying across my teeth, that was why I couldn’t breathe. Why couldn’t he see it? Move this thing so I can talk. It is leaking all over my face and down my throat. What was it? Why couldn’t he see it?
    “But not from a Chicago Paramedic, right? It’s all done.” He patted my arm. “You need to keep real still now. Just relax.”
    The radio crackled. The driver was speaking. “Level two trauma…white eighteen year old female…unrestrained front passenger…head on…windshield broken out…severe facial lacerations…shock…driver uninjured…second passenger also uninjured…unrestrained behind passenger. Seat broken out...Lutheran General Hospital…OK…
    “Do you know what happened?”

    This accident had happened like a gotcha from life. A who did you think you were slap in the face. Plans? Not for you. A get back here pull of my collar that lifted me off of my feet landing me flat on my back strapped to a gurney with my face bleeding down my neck and collecting on my back. A seeping pool of blood I could recollect from my dream. It was me.

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    1. Hi Diane! Thank you so much for your kind words--and sharing this bit of your memoir. WOW. I am a former head injury physical therapist, My first novel was about a boy who was in a car accident and suffered a spinal cord injury. It's called Head Case.

      So this is compelling
      And scary.

      I am not sure what precedes this, but these kinds of scenes definitely hook this reader.

      Do we see the accident happen?
      Are we in it?
      How are you showing it?

      My ONE suggestion: I am not a reader who likes dialects/speech language disorders in between the quotation marks. Use the beats outside the quotation to describe her frustration speaking. To make us feel her pain. But dialogue like "No. Wain. The wain!” confuses me and takes me out of the action.

      I'd love to talk to you about this!!! Email me!

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    2. Sarah
      Thank you.Me? Email you? To discuss my writing? My squeals have woken the children! But how? Thanks again

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    3. sarah.n.aronson@gmail.com!

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  28. I suspected my wife of cheating on me but I never had any proof. This went on for months, I didn't know what to do. i was so paranoid and decided to find a solution, i saw a recommendation about a (Great Matatan a powerful spell) and decided to contact him. I explained the situation about my wife to him and he said he was going to help me.I gave him all the informations he required and afterwards i received all my wife’s phones Text messages and calls, I was hurt when i saw a picture of my wife and her lover. I feel so bad about infidelity. but i am glad Great Matatan spell was able to help me get all this information, you can contact him via email ( matatanspell@yahoo.com . )guys you cant know all of this if you dont have a good spell caster like Great Matatan.

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  29. I suspected my wife of cheating on me but I never had any proof. This went on for months, I didn't know what to do. i was so paranoid and decided to find a solution, i saw a recommendation about a (Great Matatan a powerful spell) and decided to contact him. I explained the situation about my wife to him and he said he was going to help me.I gave him all the informations he required and afterwards i received all my wife’s phones Text messages and calls, I was hurt when i saw a picture of my wife and her lover. I feel so bad about infidelity. but i am glad Great Matatan spell was able to help me get all this information, you can contact him via email ( matatanspell@yahoo.com . )guys you cant know all of this if you dont have a good spell caster like Great Matatan.

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    I've gotten back with my ex boyfriend with the help of Dr.Great the best spell caster online and i highly recommends Dr.Great to anyone in need of help!.. I want to testify of how i got back my boyfriend after he breakup with me, we have been together for 3 years, recently i found out my boyfriend was having an affair with another Girl, when i confronted him, it led to quarrels and he finally broke up with me, i tried all i could to get him back but all to no avail until i saw a post in a relationship forum about a spell caster who helps people get back their lost love through Love spell, at first i doubted it but decided to give it a try, when i contacted this spell caster via his email, and he told me what to do and i did it, Then he did a Love spell for me. 28 hours later, my boyfriend really called me and told me that he miss me so much, So Amazing!! So that was how he came back that same day, with lots of love and joy, and he apologized for his mistake, and for the pain he caused me. Then from that day, our relationship was now stronger than how it were before, All thanks to DR.GREAT. he is so powerful and i decided to share my story on the Internet that Dr.Great real and powerful spell caster who i will always pray to live long to help his children in the time of trouble, if you are here and you need your Ex back or your husband moved to another woman, do not cry anymore, contact this powerful spell caster now. Here’s his contact: Email him at: infinitylovespell@gmail.com or infinitylovespell@yahoo.com, you can also call him or add him on WhatsApp: +2348118829899 check out his website http://infinitylovespell.website2.me/  you can also visit my blog at http://donnakelvin150.over-blog.com, THANKS TO DR.GREAT..  

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  31. My names is Cathy i want to testify about the great spell caster called Priest Ade my husband and i have been married for 5 years now we don't have a child and the doctor told us i can't give birth because my womb have been damaged due to wrong drugs prescription this got me so worried and my husband was not happy so he decided to get married to another girl and divorce me i was so sad i told my friend about it she told me about a powerful spell caster she gave me his email address well i never believe in it that much though i just decided to give him a try and he told me it will take 24hrs to get my husband back to me and i will get pregnant i doubted him the 3rd day my husband came back to me and was crying he said he didn't want the divorce anymore 3 weeks after the doctor confirmed that i was pregnant he can also help you contact him at
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  32. PROFESSIONAL SPELL CASTER WHO CAN HELP YOU WITH LOVE-SPELL TO GET YOUR EX LOVER BACK URGENTLY AFTER BREAKUP/DIVORCE EVEN IF YOUR SITUATION SEEMS HOPELESS! CONTACT: INFINITYLOVESPELL@GMAIL.COM IS CERTAINLY THE BEST SPELL CASTER ONLINE AND HIS RESULT IS 100% GUARANTEE.. 

    After 3 Years in a relationship with my Boyfriend, my Boyfriend started going out with other girls and showing me cold love, on several occasions he threatens to broke-up with me if I dare question him about his affair with other girls, I was totally devastated and confused until an old friend of mine told me about a spell caster on the internet DR GREAT who help people with their relationship and marriage problem by the powers of love Spells, At first I doubted If such thing ever exists but decided to give it a try, When I contact him, he told me everything I needed to do and I did and he helped me cast a Love Spell and within 28Hours my boyfriend came back to me and started apologizing, now he has stopped going out with girls and he is with me for good and for real. Contact this Great spell Caster for your relationship or marriage problem. 
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  33. This is my testimony about the good work of Dr Ojoka who help me.... I'm
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  34. I've gotten back with my ex boyfriend with the help of Dr Isikolo the best spell caster online and i highly recommends Dr Isikolo to anyone in need of help. I want to testify of how i got back my boyfriend after he breakup with me, we have been together for 3 years, recently i found out my boyfriend was having an affair with another Girl, when i confronted him, it led to quarrels and he finally broke up with me, i tried all i could to get him back but all to no avail until i saw a post in a relationship forum about a spell caster who helps people get back their lost love through Love spell, at first i doubted it but decided to give it a try, when i contacted this spell caster via his email, and he told me what to do and i did it, Then he did a Love spell for me. 48 hours later, my boyfriend really called me and told me that he miss me so much, So Amazing!! So that was how he came back that same day, with lots of love and joy, and he apologized for his mistake, and for the pain he caused me. Then from that day, our relationship was now stronger than how it were before, All thanks to Dr Isikolo. he is so powerful and i decided to share my story on the Internet that Dr Isikolo real and powerful spell caster who i will always pray to live long to help his children in the time of trouble, if you are here and you need your Ex back or your husband moved to another woman, do not cry anymore, contact this powerful spell caster now. Here’s his contact: Email him at: isikolosolutionhome@gmail.com You can also Whatsapp him on +2348133261196,THANKS TO Dr Isikolo..

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    My name is Luisa Ryan from Germany, I and my husband have been married for 10 years and we have 3 lovely kids, my husband was always busy with work but when ever it is weekend he always take me and our kids out for dinner and sometime we go shopping together because the kids like to buy things, our family was happy until my husband went on a business trip, when he came back he started acting strange he didn't have time for me and the kids anymore, last month he told me that he is tired of our marriage that he want a divorce at first I thought he was joking until he packed out of the house leaving me and the kids alone, I was heartbroken I couldn't eat for days I cried and cried and the kid were always asking for their dad and I do lied to them, I couldn't take it anymore I decided to search on how to get him back I came across Dr Great email I didn't want to email him at first but knowing am losing my husband I emailed him and explained my problem to him, he replied my mail and told me that he will help me it's will take 24 hrs to cast the spell, after he finished casting the spell he told me my husband will soon be back, few hours later my husband came back home begging and I forgive him now we are living happily together, all thanks to Dr Great for saving my marriage. If your husband or wife left you and you want him or her back the right man to bring them back is Dr Great he is a good man he is a messager send by God to help us in time of problems he can put a stop to your problem email him at infinitylovespell@gmail.com or infinitylovespell@yahoo.comWhatsApp him +2348118829899 check out his website http://infinitylovespell.website2.me/my blogs http://luisaryan35.blogspot.com/

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  36. Hello my name is Lauren i'm from USA i want to testify of a great and powerful spell caster my husband left me and the kids for 2 weeks when i called him he didn't pick up when he came back home the 3rd week he told me he wanted a divorce i was so sad i cried all night he left again i was so lonely the next day i was searching for something online when i found a spell caster called Priest Ade who have helped so many people with their problems so i contacted him with my problems he told me it will take 24hrs and my husband will be back to me i did every thing he told me to do and the next day my husband came back kneeling and begging he canceled the divorce we are now happy together Priest Ade can help you too Email him at

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  37. PROFESSIONAL SPELL CASTER WHO CAN HELP YOU WITH LOVE-SPELL TO GET YOUR EX LOVER BACK URGENTLY AFTER BREAKUP/DIVORCE EVEN IF YOUR SITUATION SEEMS HOPELESS! CONTACT: INFINITYLOVESPELL@GMAIL.COM IS CERTAINLY THE BEST SPELL CASTER ONLINE AND HIS RESULT IS 100% GUARANTEE.. 

    After 3 Years in a relationship with my Boyfriend, my Boyfriend started going out with other girls and showing me cold love, on several occasions he threatens to broke-up with me if I dare question him about his affair with other girls, I was totally devastated and confused until an old friend of mine told me about a spell caster on the internet DR GREAT who help people with their relationship and marriage problem by the powers of love Spells, At first I doubted If such thing ever exists but decided to give it a try, When I contact him, he told me everything I needed to do and I did and he helped me cast a Love Spell and within 28Hours my boyfriend came back to me and started apologizing, now he has stopped going out with girls and he is with me for good and for real. Contact this Great spell Caster for your relationship or marriage problem. 
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  38. I am so happy for making the right choice by contacting Dr. Irosi who helped me in getting my ex back by casting a love spell on him. One of the best decision i ever made was contacting Dr. Irosi to help me get my lover back, I was life filled with happiness after i contacted Dr. Irosi because he didn't just bring my lover back to me he also made our love for each other more unique and superb. If you need to spice your relationship with more love and attention contact Dr. Irosi on his Email Address [drirosisolutioncenter@gmail.com], call or whatsapp him via his contact +2348118829771 and be happy just like i am, thanks Dr. Irosi for your great work.

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  39. I’m so excited my broken Marriage has been restored. “We recently made up, even though it was difficult. It’s been more than a month now, and everything feels like it’s returned to normal. He has began to treat me better, and it’s been a healing process for both of us. The nightmare that had lasted for almost 2 years before we broke up is finally over. It’s like we fell in love all over again! We’ve both put the past behind us, and are trying to move forward – and for the first time in a long time, the future looks a lot brighter. I can’t express in words how grateful I am Dr Great! It’s like we’ve finally rediscovered those things about each other that made us fall in love in the first place. All of the worrying and stress has simply vanished. Thank you Dr Great for saving my broken Marriage and brought my husband back to me!”. Me and my husband are living together happily again.. All thanks to Dr Great. If you have any problem contact Dr Great now and i guarantee you that he will help you contact him through

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  40. I'm so excited my broken Marriage has been restored my ex husband is back after he left me and our 2kids for another woman. i was so happy to met Dr. Aire how he help many people to bring there Lover back so i contact him to help me too. that was how Dr. Aire help me to bring my husband back.. A big thank to you Dr. Aire because I never thought my ex Husband will be back to me so quickly with your spell. You are the best and world greatest. if you are here and you need your Ex Lover back or your husband moved to another woman, do not cry anymore, contact this powerful spell caster now. Here’s his contact:
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    After 3 Years in a relationship with my Boyfriend, my Boyfriend started going out with other girls and showing me cold love, on several occasions he threatens to broke-up with me if I dare question him about his affair with other girls, I was totally devastated and confused until an old friend of mine told me about a spell caster on the internet DR GREAT who help people with their relationship and marriage problem by the powers of love Spells, At first I doubted If such thing ever exists but decided to give it a try, When I contact him, he told me everything I needed to do and I did and he helped me cast a Love Spell and within 28Hours my boyfriend came back to me and started apologizing, now he has stopped going out with girls and he is with me for good and for real. Contact this Great spell Caster for your relationship or marriage problem. 
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  42. WOW!! This is the most wonderful thing i have ever experience in my life, My name is Terri Pamela, I never thought I will smile again,after my husband left me with two kids for one year, All effort to bring him back failed and i was desperate to bring him back home I thought I'm not going to see him again not until I met a lady called Miller on Facebook who told me about a spell caster called Dr.Osauyi, She gave me his email address and mobile number and I contacted him and he assured me that within 48hours my husband will come back to me, i feel happy already when i had that from him, In less than 48hours my husband came back started begging for forgiveness saying it is the devils work, so I'm still surprise till now about this miracle, because it just too real to be real I know so many lady are at there with the same problem of my but i tell you today that there is a solution for it Email Dr Osauyi on

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  43. GREAT LOVE SPELL CASTER PRIEST WISDOM THAT HELP ME SAVE MY RELATIONSHIP.TEXT OR ADD HIM UP ON WHATSAPP: +2348124644470

     My name is CLARA JAMES .i want to give thanks to PRIEST WISDOM for bringing back my ex husband.No one could have ever made me believe that the letter I’m about to write would actually one day be written. I was the world’s biggest skeptic. I never believed in magic spells or anything like this, but I was told by a reliable source (a very close co-worker) that Trust is a very dedicated, gifted, and talented person,It was one of the best things I have ever done. My love life was in shambles; I had been through two divorces and was on the brink of a third. I just couldn't face another divorce, and I wanted to try harder to make our relationship work, but my husband didn’t seem to care. and he brake up with me again.I was confuse and do not no what to do again,rather them to get in contact with PRIEST WISDOM . He did a love spell that make my husband come back to me. we are now very much happy with our self. PRIEST WISDOM make him to realize how much we love and need each other.This man is for REAL and for good.he can also help you to fix your broken relationship. I had my husband back! It was like a miracle! He suddenly wanted to go to marriage counseling, and we’re doing very, very well,in our love life.contact email Supernaturalspell1@gmail.com or his web page   https://supernaturalspell21.blogspot.com/     text or add him up on whatsApp at: +2348124644470

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  44. What a great and inspiring story! I was married for seven years without any child, because of this my husband start acting strange, coming home lately and not spending time with me any more and he divorced me. So i became very sad and lost in life because my doctor told me there is no way for me to get pregnant this really make life miserable for me. until i came across a friend who told me about DR AJAYI from the Internet, how he has helped a lot of women with this similar problems that i am going through so i contacted him on: drajayi1990@gmail.com and explained to him. he told me all what to provide before he could cast a reunite spell to bring back my husband which i did and he sent a powerful prayer which i had to say at mid night while he cast the love spell. It was a miracle, 48 hours later my one and only husband came back to me and apologize for all he has done and told me he is fully ready to support me in any thing i want,i quickly call DR AJAYI and told him what was going on at that moment and he also prepared and sent me a herbal medicine which he said it will cure every unwanted diseases or infections that has been stopping me from conceiving then instructed me on how to use it before meeting with my husband. Behold after using this native herbs and root, few weeks later i started feeling pregnancy signs all over me, truly i was pregnant i just gave birth to a baby boy on the 1st of this month. I Vow to let the whole world know about DR AJAYI for saving my relationship and for also giving me children i can proudly call my own today. For any woman who think it impossible, here is an opportunity for you to smile and bring happiness to your family kindly contact DR AJAYI via Email on: drajayi1990@gmail.com . com or reach on his WhatsApp OR Viber number : +2347084887094 Indeed, he is a God sent to bring back lost lovers and bring you happiness

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  45. HOW I GOT MY HUSBAND BACK WITH THE HELP OF PRIEST WISDOM CONTACT ON WHATS_APP NUMBER +2348124644470

    This is my testimony about the good work of priest wisdom who help me.... I'm Ann Earnis from north Carolina USA. And am sorry for putting this on net but i will have to, by this world best spell caster that brought back my husband who left me out for past 3 years, i eventually met this man on a blog site posting by one of is client for help, i explained everything to him and he told me about a spell caster that he had heard about and he gave me an email address to write to the spell caster to tell him my problems. In just 1 days, my husband was back to me. I just want to say thank you to this truthful and sincere spell caster, sir all you told me have come to pass and thank you sir. Please i want to tell everyone who is looking for any solution to their problem, i advice you to kindly consult this spell caster, he is real,he is powerful and whatever the spell caster tell is what will happen, because all what the spell caster told me came to pass. You can kindly contact him on: his email address is supernaturalspell1@gmail.com or directly on whats-app +2348124644470  or   https://supernaturalspell21.blogspot.com/  

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  46. I am very happy today with my family. My name is rose sarah living in USA, My husband left me for a good 3 years now, and i love him so much, i have been looking for a way to get him back since then. i have tried many options but he did not come back, until i met a friend that darted me to Dr.life a spell caster, who helped me to bring back my husband after 2 weeks. Me and my husband are living happily together today, That man is great, you can contact him via email drlifetemple@gmail.com… Now i will advice any serious persons that found themselves in this kind of problem to contact him now a fast solution without steress.. He always hello, now i call him my father.contact him now he is always online email (drlifetemple@gmail.com) or contact him on his whatsapp mobile line +2347010538590

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  47. My husband was once loving and caring but to a point he stopped and totally forsake me, he wasn't having time for me because he was having an affair, all he was, i was so devastated that i didn't know what to do. I did love him so much, even when he was still not caring and was cheating i couldn't leave cause i still loved him, i sorted for help from every where i could to have my husband back, i luckily found Robinson Buckler who was helping people out on relationship and marriage issues. I went on and contacted him, i explained what i was going through in my marriage, then he assured me that he would help me, i did all that he instructed me to do and then he told me that my husband would return to me after some days, i waited patiently and after some days passed my husband came home one evening and started apologizing to me to forgive him for how he had been treating me, i was so surprised beyond words that i can't thank this you enough. contact_____________Robinsonbuckler@yahoo.com _____________________Whatsapp phone number + 1 (502) 443 8691, https://robinbuckler.com

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    I've gotten back with my ex boyfriend with the help of Dr.Great the best spell caster online and i highly recommends Dr.Great to anyone in need of help!.. I want to testify of how i got back my boyfriend after he breakup with me, we have been together for 3 years, recently i found out my boyfriend was having an affair with another Girl, when i confronted him, it led to quarrels and he finally broke up with me, i tried all i could to get him back but all to no avail until i saw a post in a relationship forum about a spell caster who helps people get back their lost love through Love spell, at first i doubted it but decided to give it a try, when i contacted this spell caster via his email, and he told me what to do and i did it, Then he did a Love spell for me. 28 hours later, my boyfriend really called me and told me that he miss me so much, So Amazing!! So that was how he came back that same day, with lots of love and joy, and he apologized for his mistake, and for the pain he caused me. Then from that day, our relationship was now stronger than how it were before, All thanks to DR.GREAT. he is so powerful and i decided to share my story on the Internet that Dr.Great real and powerful spell caster who i will always pray to live long to help his children in the time of trouble, if you are here and you need your Ex back or your husband moved to another woman, do not cry anymore, contact this powerful spell caster now. Here’s his contact: Email him at: infinitylovespell@gmail.com or infinitylovespell@yahoo.com, you can also call him or add him on WhatsApp: +2348118829899 check out his website http://infinitylovespell.website2.me/  or  blog http://infinitylovespell1.blogspot.com you can also visit my blog at http://donnakelvin150.over-blog.com, THANKS TO DR.GREAT..  

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    I've gotten back with my ex boyfriend with the help of Dr.Great the best spell caster online and i highly recommends Dr.Great to anyone in need of help!.. I want to testify of how i got back my boyfriend after he breakup with me, we have been together for 3 years, recently i found out my boyfriend was having an affair with another Girl, when i confronted him, it led to quarrels and he finally broke up with me, i tried all i could to get him back but all to no avail until i saw a post in a relationship forum about a spell caster who helps people get back their lost love through Love spell, at first i doubted it but decided to give it a try, when i contacted this spell caster via his email, and he told me what to do and i did it, Then he did a Love spell for me. 28 hours later, my boyfriend really called me and told me that he miss me so much, So Amazing!! So that was how he came back that same day, with lots of love and joy, and he apologized for his mistake, and for the pain he caused me. Then from that day, our relationship was now stronger than how it were before, All thanks to DR.GREAT. he is so powerful and i decided to share my story on the Internet that Dr.Great real and powerful spell caster who i will always pray to live long to help his children in the time of trouble, if you are here and you need your Ex back or your husband moved to another woman, do not cry anymore, contact this powerful spell caster now. Here’s his contact: Email him at: infinitylovespell@gmail.com or infinitylovespell@yahoo.com, you can also call him or add him on WhatsApp: +2348118829899 check out his website http://infinitylovespell.website2.me/  or  blog http://infinitylovespell1.blogspot.com you can also visit my blog at http://donnakelvin150.over-blog.com, THANKS TO DR.GREAT..  

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  50. My name is SHERRY WALJER from USA Massachusetts, i want to testify to the general public how my relationship was restored back by the great power's of Dr Larry after three months of loneliness, my ex-lover called me after my contact with Dr Larry that he want us to come back and start a good home, now we are happily together again as lovers. All thanks to Dr Larry who did a love spell for me for my ex lover to return home. I will keep sharing this until people who also need help see this for his wonderful help. You can contact him on his via email assurancesolutionhome@gmail. com or whatsapp him on +2348102316854     website  http://assurancesolutionhome.website2.me/  



    My name is SHERRY WALJER from USA Massachusetts, i want to testify to the general public how my relationship was restored back by the great power's of Dr Larry after three months of loneliness, my ex-lover called me after my contact with Dr Larry that he want us to come back and start a good home, now we are happily together again as lovers. All thanks to Dr Larry who did a love spell for me for my ex lover to return home. I will keep sharing this until people who also need help see this for his wonderful help. You can contact him on his via email assurancesolutionhome@gmail. com or whatsapp him on +2348102316854     website  http://assurancesolutionhome.website2.me/  



    My name is SHERRY WALJER from USA Massachusetts, i want to testify to the general public how my relationship was restored back by the great power's of Dr Larry after three months of loneliness, my ex-lover called me after my contact with Dr Larry that he want us to come back and start a good home, now we are happily together again as lovers. All thanks to Dr Larry who did a love spell for me for my ex lover to return home. I will keep sharing this until people who also need help see this for his wonderful help. You can contact him on his via email assurancesolutionhome@gmail. com or whatsapp him on +2348102316854     website  http://assurancesolutionhome.website2.me/  

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  51. PROFESSIONAL SPELL CASTER WHO CAN HELP YOU WITH LOVE-SPELL TO GET YOUR EX LOVER BACK URGENTLY AFTER BREAKUP/DIVORCE EVEN IF YOUR SITUATION SEEMS HOPELESS! CONTACT: INFINITYLOVESPELL@GMAIL.COM IS CERTAINLY THE BEST SPELL CASTER ONLINE AND HIS RESULT IS 100% GUARANTEE.. 

    After 3 Years in a relationship with my Boyfriend, my Boyfriend started going out with other girls and showing me cold love, on several occasions he threatens to broke-up with me if I dare question him about his affair with other girls, I was totally devastated and confused until an old friend of mine told me about a spell caster on the internet DR GREAT who help people with their relationship and marriage problem by the powers of love Spells, At first I doubted If such thing ever exists but decided to give it a try, When I contact him, he told me everything I needed to do and I did and he helped me cast a Love Spell and within 28Hours my boyfriend came back to me and started apologizing, now he has stopped going out with girls and he is with me for good and for real. Contact this Great spell Caster for your relationship or marriage problem. 
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  52. HOW I GOT MY HUSBAND BACK WITH THE HELP OF PRIEST WISDOM CONTACT ON WHATS_APP NUMBER +2348124644470

    This is my testimony about the good work of priest wisdom who help me.... I'm Ann Earnis from north Carolina USA. And am sorry for putting this on net but i will have to, by this world best spell caster that brought back my husband who left me out for past 3 years, i eventually me t this man on a blog site posting by one of is client for help, i explained everything to him and he told me about a spell caster that he had heard about and he gave me an email address to write to the spell caster to tell him my problems. In just 1 days, my husband was back to me. I just want to say thank you to this truthful and sincere spell caster, sir all you told me have come to pass and thank you sir. Please i want to tell everyone who is looking for any solution to their problem, i advice you to kindly consult this spell caster, he is real,he is powerful and whatever the spell caster tell is what will happen, because all what the spell caster told me came to pass. You can kindly contact him on: his email address is supernaturalspell1@gmail.com or directly on whats-app +2348124644470  or   https://supernaturalspell21.blogspot.com/  

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  53. My husband and I have been married for about 7 yrs now. We were happily married with two kids, a boy and a girl. 3 months ago, I started to notice some strange behavior from him and a few weeks later I found out that my husband is seeing someone. He started coming home late from work, he hardly care about me or the kids anymore, Sometimes he goes out and doesn't even come back home for about 2-3 days. I did all I could to rectify this problem but all to no avail. I became very worried and needed help. As I was browsing through the Internet one day, I came across a website that suggested that Dr Great can help solve marital problems, restore broken relationships and so on. So, I felt I should give him a try. I contacted him and he did a spell for me. Two days later, my husband came to me and apologized for the wrongs he did and promise never to do it again. Ever since then, everything has returned back to normal. I and my family are living together happily again.. All thanks to Dr Great . If you need a spell caster that can cast a spell that truly works, I suggest you contact him. He will not disappoint you. This is his E-mail: 

    infinitylovespell@gmail.com or infinitylovespell@yahoo.com

    WhatsApp +2348118829899

    website http://infinitylovespell.website2.me/

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  54. I was able to get my ex back with the help of Kwale Temple Spell. Without delay I got my ex back after 48 hours of contacting Dr.Kwale I'm so happy today for the help Dr Kwale render to me. Contact Dr Kwale today on kwaletemple@gmail.com or whats app him on +2348056141089.

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